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1 Eliza May Juan on Tue May 04, 2010 4:32 pm

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Name:Eliza
Age:15
Gender:Female
Description:
5'5" weighing 115 lbs. Jet black straight long hair normally worn down with a bang. Big green eyes with long lashes and a fair complexion.

Personality: Eliza likes to keep busy (but not too busy), is slightly bossy and moody.

Biography: Her mother died in a car accident when she was only 6 months old and her dad, overcome with grief, committed suicide a short time later. A strict rich family adopted her and tried to make her the perfect daughter by making her take ballet,yoga, fencing, karate, gymnastics and chess. They felt they needed to keep her busy and away from "lower class people" as they called them. She went to an all girls boarding school since she was 5 where she had to take the hardest academic courses they offered. Even though the family tried to keep her busy she was still very lonely and going out of her mind with boredom. Eliza ran away the day after her 15th birthday.

Expertise: ballet, yoga, fencing, karate, gymnastics, math and writing.

2 Re: Eliza May Juan on Tue May 04, 2010 4:45 pm

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Passable, barely. It would be nice for more details, but other than that I don't see much of a problem.

Please keep your character from becoming a Mary Sue, thank you.

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3 Re: Eliza May Juan on Tue May 04, 2010 8:16 pm

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