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Ryu Maya - My character

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1 Ryu Maya - My character on Thu May 13, 2010 8:59 pm

Cooke


Name: Ryu Maya
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Description:

Ryu is fairly average, standing 5'9 and weighing 120 lbs. He's on the skinny side, with large muscles.

His left eye is green and his right eye is blue, giving his face an odd appearance.

His hair is auburn with blond streaks and falls to his shoulders.

He wears black clothes and always has earbuds in his ears.

He can sense auras about people and can predict the future. In short, he's psychic.

He's really fast and eats like crazy. He loves McGreasy's.

Personality:
Calm and collected. Alert.

Biography:
His parents were killed by the military, and he joined a street gang. He seeks revenge on the police and carries a magnum at all times.

Expertise: Guns!

2 Re: Ryu Maya - My character on Fri May 14, 2010 12:09 pm

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A skinny guy who loves McGreasy's? I don't think so. He's a tad underweight, and characters don't start with a weapon. Psychic? 'Fraid not.

And as for the history, CHANGE IT! Nobody! Nobody gets killed by the military. Waaaaay too over the top.

Revise your profile, and I'll take another look at it.


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3 Re: Ryu Maya - My character on Fri May 14, 2010 7:19 pm

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Name: Ryu Maya
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Description:

Ryu is fairly average, standing 5'9 and weighing 140 lbs. He's on the average side, with large muscles.

His left eye is green and his right eye is blue, giving his face an odd appearance.

His hair is auburn with blond streaks and falls to his shoulders.

He wears black clothes and always has earbuds in his ears.

He claims to be psychic, but really isn't.

Personality:
Calm and collected. Alert.

Biography:

Pretty much a normal person except for the fact he lived with his grandparents for several years.

Expertise: Guns!

4 Re: Ryu Maya - My character on Fri May 14, 2010 10:29 pm

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Kinda drab, but I don't see any problems with the profile. Approved, barely. Wait for a second opinion.


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5 Re: Ryu Maya - My character on Sun May 16, 2010 11:44 am

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... Wow. Lash thought MINE was bare xD Approved I guess...


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